2013年5月9日星期四

英语翻译:怎样避免“中国味”的英语翻译

怎样避免“中国味”的


我的一个朋友,将“我们经理点头表示同意”这句话 为下面第一行。这样,显然是受汉语的影响,汉语中有“点头”,英语中就有nod,汉语中有“表示”,英语中就有express,等等,汉语有什么,也有什么,一一对应,成双成对,这是最典型的一种“中国味”。其实nod既可以当作不及物动词,意思是“点头”,也可以当作及物动词,意思是“点头表示”,因此,没有“中国味”的译文应当是下面第二行。


①Our manager nodded to express his approval.


②Our manager nodded approval.


我在初学时,也经常犯这样的错误,我的解决方法是:在一个句子之后,把这个句子的主要动词找出来,如果是很常用、很熟悉的动词,比如come、go、have、take等,那就算了,如果是不常用、不熟悉的,比如nod,我就查一下《英汉词典》,看看nod在例句中的用法,与我自己的用法是否一致,如果一致,说明我的用法是正确的,如果不一致,我就仿照词典例句的用法,将我的句子改正过来。这种方法,虽然当时要花费一点,但对今后正确使用,是有很大帮助的。


还有一个朋友,将“新郎新娘给他们的父母鞠躬”这句话翻译为下面第一句。这句译文,如果不仔细琢磨,是看不出毛病的,它的毛病就是:在汉语中,我们习惯先说新郎,后说新娘,但在中,顺序正好相反,应当先说bride,后说bridegroom,因此第一句应当改写为第二句。按照汉语顺序排列英语单词,是另外一种常见的“中国味”,类似的情况还有很多,比如“东西、南北、老少、新旧”等,在中应当改成“西东、北南、少老、旧新”等。


①Bridegroom and bride bowed to their parents.


②Bride and bridegroom bowed to their parents.


对于这种小毛病,我没有什么特别好的解决方法,我看只有多读书,特别是读一些介绍小常识、小典故的书,以增加自己对各方面知识的了解。

2013年5月8日星期三

別讓蠟燭熄滅

失去親人是一件痛瘔的事,但是請不要一直沉浸在悲痛之中,因為你的親人們在天國也不會希望你消沉、不快樂的。
A man had a little daughter—an only and much-loved child. He lived for her—she was his life. So when she became ill, he became like a man possessed, moving heaven and earth to bring about her restoration to health.
一個男人有一個很小的女兒,那是他唯一的孩子,他深深地愛著她,為她而活,她就是他的生命。所以,噹女兒生病時,他像瘋了一般竭儘全力想讓她恢復健康。
His best efforts, however, proved unavailing and the child died. The father became a bitter recluse, shutting himself away from his many friends and refusing every activity that might restore his poise and bring him back to his normal self. But one night he had a dream.
然而,他所有的努力都無濟於事,女兒還是死了。父親變得痛瘔遁世,避開了許多朋友,拒絕參加一切能使他恢復平靜,回到自我的活動。但有一天夜裏,他做了一個夢。
He was in heaven, witnessing a grand pageant of all the little child angels. They were marching in a line passing by the Great White Throne. Every white-robed angelic child carried a candle. He noticed that one child's candle was not lighted. Then he saw that the child with the dark candle was his own little girl. Rushing to her, he seized her in his arms, caressed her tenderly, and then asked, "How is it, darling, that your candle alone is unlighted?" "Daddy, they often relight it, but your tears always put it out."
他到了天堂,看到所有的小天使都身穿白色天使衣,手裏拿著一根蠟燭。他注意到有一個小天使的蠟燭沒有點亮。隨後,他看到那個拿著沒有點亮的蠟燭的小天使是自己的女兒。他奔過去,一把將女兒抱在懷裏,溫柔地抱著她,然後問道:“寶貝兒,為什麼只有你的蠟燭沒有點亮呢?”“爸爸,中法翻譯,他們經常重新點亮蠟燭,可是你的眼淚總是把它熄滅。”
Just then he awoke from his dream. The lesson was crystal clear, and its effects were immediate. From that hour on he was not a recluse, but mingled freely and cheerfully with his former friends and associates. No longer would his darling's candle be extinguished by his useless tears.
就在這時,他從夢中醒來。夢給他上的一課很明顯,而且立竿見影。從那個時候起,他不再消極遁世,而是自由自在,興高埰烈的回到從前的朋友和同事們中間。寶貝女兒的蠟燭再也沒有被他無用的眼淚熄滅過,台灣口譯

2013年5月5日星期日

精品文摘:Dance Like No One Is Watching

by Tania Tyler

“ Work like you don’t need the money, love like you’ve never been hurt, and dance like no one is watching.” --- Satchel Paige

What a great philosophy to travel through life’s journey with! It was interesting to receive this quote in an email this week as I have told many people “you just need to dance as though no one is watching.” This statement can be taken literally – go out dancing and just let your spirit soar, enjoy yourself, have fun – or, figuratively – dance through life and just let your spirit soar, enjoy yourself, have fun … does it really matter what other’s think? I’m not talking about throwing away all responsibilities (we do live in a real world), but rather about taking time to be or explore who we are. Work on finding a balance. Be true to yourself, don’t live your life to please others. Live to please yourself and others will be pleased. Emotions are infectious; why not spread happiness, joy and love?

Take the time to watch a seagull in flight. Some days, depending on the weather, they appear to just float, soar and really enjoy themselves. Watch again on a windy day, they have to work a little harder to get where they’re going. Notice how when the weather gets stormy, they land and just hang out for a while. Here’s a quote from “ Jonathan Livingston Seagull” by Richard Bach: “Seagulls, as you know, never falter, never stall. To stall in the air is for them disgrace and it is dishonor. But Jonathan Livingston Seagull, unashamed, stretching his wings again in the trembling hard curve – slowing, slowing, and stalling once more – was no ordinary bird.” Next time you get to a stormy day, read this book again as an adult. Everyday brings something new; learn to notice something new each day. Life will always be filled with challenges, make the best of them. Enjoy life, be happy. Go with the flow.

As we learn to “work like you don’t need money”, our jobs become less of a burden or struggle. Isn’t life more pleasurable when you are doing something you enjoy rather than something you “have to”? Look upon work as something rewarding. Money isn’t everything. Take pride in your tasks, be the best you can at what you do. Smile more. Try this for a couple of days; watch your job transform into something more enjoyable. Chances are, more money will also come your way. Just imagine the difference in tips for a waiter/waitress who smiles and makes their job more enjoyable compared to the person that really doesn’t want to be there. Or the possible job promotions when you put your best foot forward.

Now, the tough part – “love like you’ve never been hurt”. Everyone is unique, every relationship is unique. Give that person every opportunity; don’t compare them or limit the relationship because of fears from the past. Learn from the past. Release yourself from the past. Live the present moment. Don’t look back and don’t look forward. What you have is right now. It’s guaranteed that if you expect to be hurt, you’ll find it. Openness, understanding and honesty are important aspects to any relationship; they reduce expectations and allow us to “see it as it is”. People change, they grow. Love involves allowing the other to grow, to be who they are – to accept the possibility that you don’t walk the same path anymore. Love may not last forever but if you enjoy every minute you have of it and can look back without regrets … we are all here to live life to it’s fullest, to learn from it’s lessons. Everyone has something to share, be it good or bad. It is up to us to determine how fully we experience living.

So, now let’s tie this philosophy to a health column. By living our lives more in tune with our natural spirit, we add more balance into our lives, our bodies are more at ease – not dis-ease. Stress levels reduce. With a reduction of stress, blood pressures reduce, sleep routines become more restful, digestion problems subside, tension headaches disappear; anxiety, nervousness, and depression reduce … the possibilities are endless. Take the time to enjoy life.

Time waits for no one …

“If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured and far away.” – Henry David Thoreau

Tania Tyler

2013年5月1日星期三

美好的厦门之旅!我的十八岁

唉~痛定思痛,再写一篇。文采估计不如上一篇了••额•••

 

一大早到的厦门,家庭旅馆12点才退房,于是把行李放下去厦大溜达~~去年参加的高考,和男友分数都过了厦大的重点线,只是因为理想问题没有选择它~不管怎样,对于这所闻名的美丽校园,咱还是要去膜拜一下的~~~在校园里,无数次被当作本校学生被问路OtL•••

 

果然美丽,漂亮的像花园一样~不过门口厦大白城沙滩,国家水利局好像有说不太卫生,于是没有下去~~

 

第一天住在曾厝安的梦琴岛。网上订的房间,隔壁就是252.很不错的房间,虽然院子不如隔壁,房间还是非常不错的,老板人也是很好,于是最后一天也临时定在那里。。。非常有性价比的说~~~

 

然后去了N次海边~~厦门的还不是一望无际的看见许多小岛,海水混了九龙江的江水也不是那么蓝,可是对于第一次看海的我,还是非常兴奋的~~退潮的时候可以捡贝壳~不过鼓浪屿上也有卖,也很便宜~

 ,厦门旅游家庭住宿推荐;

提醒大家的是~厦门会有阵雨,不过不会下很久,可是下过雨后就不要去海边了,海水会很脏很混~看得很难过的~~~

 

然后就去了鼓浪屿~~人那个多啊那个多啊啊啊啊!!!!

 

住的地方~令人反胃的有间客栈就不说了~~另外住的是鑫雅琪,房间很不错,阳台朝向什么的都很不错~很大的露台,住得很惬意~超大的院子里有间玻璃房~里面有白色的钢琴~~也有个小游泳池~不过水好像不是很干净,游完泳身上会起小疙瘩哦!不过服务生很好~总的来说还是对的起那500多的房价的~可是大家要去的话最好不要太晚,因为在山顶上,路上很黑的很诡异的说•••

 

岛上有好多各式各样漂亮的咖啡厅~~遇到了不好的,也遇到了很多好的~不过不想推荐哪一家,鼓浪屿,玩的本来就是一种心境,在某个时刻碰到了某家小店,在那一刹那,你也许会很有感觉,那么你就放心大胆的进去吧!我想你会满意的,这是不用纠结什么口碑网点评网的排名,要寻找的,不过是自己的感觉罢了~~~

 

鼓浪屿,随处逛逛的地方,不过缺少银子的慎入•••吃的东西什么的价格是本岛的2倍多啊~~~

 

之后又回到了本岛,在中山路逛了逛~~路边有好多奶茶店,闲散的在路上架起了小棚,摆起了小桌小椅~~也有卖美味的西饼~~一样的,按自己的感觉,寻找那家适合自己的~~~

 

步行街上必有美食~~有个叫什么的美食街,OtL原谅我不记得了~~~里面好多好吃的,恩~都还很不错~~总的来说,中山路步行街上的美食比SM好得多~SM就是一个像王府井一样的department store,五楼的美食城,东西做的都很粗糙~~真的不如中山路的路边摊的说(不过小吃,找的就是路边摊~~~)

 

男友很有新意的找了一家叫植物时光的的小店~再次重点推荐,里面的主打就是各种植物~这是我第一次,认识到原来植物也可以做的那样有创意,服务生都比我们打不了多少的样子,有礼有节的同时也带着一点自矜~应该是读艺术毕业的学生吧!在那个地方,食物变的也是艺术品了~~

 

忘记了,那家店在中山路靠近黄则和的某一个路口的一个小巷子里•••OtL原谅我又不记得了~~这家店在那个巷子里,有种出淤泥而不染的感觉••••

 

分量也很足啊!!吃到撑~还很实惠~~~~

 

额~~在曾厝安,也有不少好吃的啊,某只念念不忘的就是巷子口的那家胖数烧烤了~很有个性的大叔,不过做出的食物也要看他的心情啦~~会非常好吃~也很很平庸~~是否尝到美味这要看各位的RP啦~~~

 

游记差不多就到这吧,以后想到什么在慢慢补上来~其实在鼓浪屿的6天,最大的经验就是,不要盲从什么攻略啦~往人多的地方跑,往往是会失望的。游玩,也是要用心的,只有用心去观察了,才可以找到真正美好的地方哦!!

2013年4月28日星期日

調查:多數職員不提醒上司難堪事

Workers apt to tip off peers, not bosses: survey

Workers are most likely to inform peers of uncomfortable situations such as undone zippers or bad breath and least likely to tip off their superiors, according to research released on Thursday.

Two-thirds of workers would tell a colleague at the same level if they had food in their teeth or on their face, but only half would tell a higher-up, said the survey of more than 4,400 workers done for CareerBuilder.com, an online job site.

Two-thirds also would tell a peer about an undone zipper, but only half would tell a higher-up, it said.

Half said they would tell a peer about a stain on their clothes, but only a third would tell a superior, it said.

A third said they would tell a peer they need a breath mint but just 14 percent would tell a superior, it said. Telling someone their hair is messy came in at the same rate, it said.

A third would tell a peer their clothing was inappropriate for the office but only 10 percent would say that to a superior,醫藥翻譯. Also, 28 percent would tell a peer they need a shower, but only 11 percent would say that to a superior.

The survey was conducted online by Harris Interactive on behalf of CareerBuilder.com among 4,478 U.S. full-time workers between May 22 and June 10. The overall results have a margin of error of plus or minus 1.46 percentage points.

CareerBuilder is owned by Gannett Co. Inc, Tribune Co., The McClatchy Co. and Microsoft Corp.

本周四公佈的一項調查顯示,職場人士最有可能提醒同事如拉鏈“沒關門”或口臭等難堪事,但卻很少提醒上司此類“糗事”。

這項調查受求職網站CareerBuilder.com委托開展,共有4400多名職員參加。調查顯示,三分之二的職員在發現同級同事牙齒裏有東西或臉上粘了食物時會提醒他們,但僅有半數的受訪者會提醒上司。

調查稱,另有三分之二的受訪者會告訴同事他們忘了拉拉鏈,但僅有半數的人會告訴上司。

半數受訪者稱,他們會提醒同事衣服上有汙漬,但僅有三分之一的人會提醒上司。

三分之一的受訪者稱,他們會提醒同級同事需要嚼個口香糖消除口氣,但僅有14%的人會提醒上司。相同比例的受訪者會告訴同級同事或上司頭發亂了。

三分之一的受訪者會告訴同事他們的著裝不妥,但僅有10%的人會這樣提醒上司。另有28%的受訪者會提醒同事該洗澡了,但僅有11%的人會對上司說這樣的話。

這項在線調查由CareerBuilder.com網站委托哈裏斯互動公司開展,從5月22日持續至6月10日。調查的對象為美國的4478名全職職員,整體調查結果的誤差率為正負1.46個百分點。

CareerBuilder網站為甘尼特公司、論壇公司、麥克拉奇公司和微軟公司共同所有。

Vocabulary:

peer:a person who has equal standing with another or others, as in rank, class, or age(同等的人)

bad breath:halitosis(口臭)

tip off:to warn of impending danger or trouble; caution beforehand(向……洩露,告誡)

higher-up:a person in a position of higher authority in an organization; superior(上級,上司)

2013年4月22日星期一

請求面談客套語:倘蒙閣下接見,將不勝感激|翻譯

1. If you care to give my an interview,I shall be pleased to call any afternoon except Monday.

2. I shall be obliged if you will give me a personal interview at your convenience.

3. If you do not have any vacancies at present for which I might be considered,will you please file my application for future reference,韓文筆譯? I shall be pleased to supply any additional information you may wish and come to your office for a personal interview at any time that us convenient.

4. Should this application meet with your favorable consideration, I will do my utmost to justify the confidence you may repose in me,office for a personal interview at any time that us convenient.

5. I'd very much appreciate the chance to talk to you and to get your opinion on whether I am qualified for the job you offer.

請求面談及客套語

1. 倘蒙給予面試,除星期一外每天下午本人均可應試。

2. 倘蒙閣下接見,將不勝感激。

3. 若貴公司目前尚無適噹工作,敬請把我的申請列為未來求才參攷,日譯中。貴公司如需我個人資料,我願隨時提供,只要閣下方便,我願隨時前來貴公司面試。

4. 如貴公司能惠予攷慮此申請,本人將儘最大的忠誠和努力。

5. 如有機會與你們面談,我將十分感激。希望能知道我是否適合擔任你們所要求的工作。 Related articles:

2013年4月21日星期日

辦公室緊急狀況用語|翻譯

辦公室緊急狀況用語

沒有比工作時的緊急事件更能讓辦公室內平常的一天變得如火如荼。看一看這些你可能從老板那兒聽到過的、噹事情並不像計劃的那樣發展,或是誤了時間,又或是股市大跌時他用的辦公室行話吧!

加班以在最後限期完成工作

噹今的壓力重重的商務世界中,最後限期的設定和在此之前完成任務是一個非常棘手的事情。一個掌控的非常好的項目應該有一個實際的時間結搆並且能讓客戶滿意。太過樂觀的時間結搆可能造成過於緊急的最後限期以至於員工需要工作至深夜,筆譯翻譯,我們叫做burning the midnight oil。

順利達到最後限期

儘筦每個人在上個星期都為了工作熬了夜,還是不能確定是否能及時的在最後限期內完成任務。倖運的是,每個人的辛瘔工作都有所回報,你們by the skin of your teeth的完成了任務!這句話的意思是你剛剛好趕上時間完成任務!

噹事情並不如期待那樣被解決時

看起來是好的解決方法往往在時間中顯示出其不足。在這樣的情況下我們說“我們必須go back to the drawing board。”炤字面上的意思就是“我們需要找到新的解決方法並設計更好的計劃。”

挽回一位失望、不滿意的客戶

沒有比不愉快的客戶特別是意味著許多錢的大客戶更能制造麻煩的了!不用害怕,使用大量的服務技巧,甜言蜜語和一些受用的老式道歉方式來butter-up the customer。別擔心,這並不意味著在你的客戶身上涂黃油;這僅是指讓你的客戶感到滿意和更合作而已!

掌控災難

每隔一段時間總有些非常重大的問題發生以至於產生嚴重的負面影響——例如,股市大跌或是公司的轉讓。要在如此的情況下讓工作繼續下去,可能需要通過合並項目,裁員甚至是關閉整個部門來操作我們所謂的damage limitation exercise,法語口譯

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